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I was in Egypt visiting three ancient pyramids.We were on a special tour that allows us to go inside. Hey Bob can you pass me my drink i was dehydrating as fast as a cheeter runs. Were going in soon so we weren’t allowed to bring any food inside.come on guys were going in two minutes chop chop two minutes later we're going O.M.G look at these tunnels there’s writing on the walls there killing a Buffalo. O.M.G. there's human liver and brain look there’s a coffin.Three hours of looking at guts and human body parts the Farrow they opened the coffin he’s so ugly.
it is a nice piece of writing.But,I don't get the bit when you say, Hey Bob can you pass me my drink i was dehydrating as fast as a cheeter runs.I like the part when you say that you are on a tour because you get to go inside.
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